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One More version 2

by ~Rhiannfleming, Mar 7, 2013, 5:32:59 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Honey before we say goodbye,
please sing me one more lullaby

A soft soothing melody,
breaking chains setting me free

Sing of love illuminated by firefly fire
and strong deep desire

Play a tune with harmony
how we felt, you and me

Laying in each other’s arms, saying how much we care
tell me in that moment you felt as light as air...

Bring in more drum beats,
dare to say the 3 little words,

Sing nothing else is more true,
than when you say I love you

But I hear the rhythm change
The music starts to fade
No longer in sync with the beat of your heart

Honey before we say goodbye
please tell me one more lie

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One More version 1Please tell me one more lie
strung into a melody
so it feels like the truth, and sets me free

Sing of love
illuminated by firefly light
and a long drawn out goodnight

Play a tune of harmony;
feeling light as air
in your arms and hearing you say that you care

Let the drum take over
feel the fear of fights
suddenly there are no more goodnights

the music fades,
but before we say goodbye,
honey please sing me one more lullabyOne More version 1 by ~Rhiannfleming

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One More version 2Honey before we say goodbye,
please sing me one more lullaby

A soft soothing melody,
breaking chains setting me free

Sing of love illuminated by firefly fire
and strong deep desire

Play a tune with harmony
how we felt, you and me

Laying in each other’s arms, saying how much we care
tell me in that moment you felt as light as air...

Bring in more drum beats,
dare to say the 3 little words,

Sing nothing else is more true,
than when you say I love you

But I hear the rhythm change
The music starts to fade
No longer in sync with the beat of your heart

Honey before we say goodbye
please tell me one more lieOne More version 2 by ~Rhiannfleming

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Bed timeGoodnight, sleep tight,
Let all your fears take flight.
It is time for us to turn out the light.
Monsters hiding, you lay down too!
Everyone sing the “I’m not tired” blues,
But I see all the bed time clues...
Droopy eyes
Wide yawns
Trying to be hidden by smiles
And complaints that falling asleep takes such a long while.
But if you just close your eyes...

and listen to my voice float away.....

You will drift into the dream world of endless playBed time by ~Rhiannfleming

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Heart of stone, Wings of leadHeart of stone, wings of lead
You do not fly, you sink instead.
You learned to follow not your heart but your head,
Which told you that feelings would only hurt you in the end,
That life would be easier without a friend.
No one to take care of, no one to cause guilt,
No one to tear down the walls you built.
But also no one to love, loneliness must suffice,
In your mind an unfortunate but necessary sacrifice.Heart of stone, Wings of lead by ~Rhiannfleming

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by ~Rhiannfleming, 1 week, 6 days ago
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Hello to whoever may be reading this, I hope you are well

That your day is full of sunshine and rainbows! If it's not, I know how you feel. As great as it would be to have life just be one big happy experience, it isn't, and that can suck. I'm sure you can deduce that I am going through one of those not so awesome periods, which is why I haven't written anything latley. I am super frusterated that I just can't seem to put anything down on paper, or the internet. I find that writing is generally driven by some sort of emotion, and I'm feeling a whole freaking lot of emotions right now, but I just cannot seem to write. Are some things just not meant to be written? I'm starting to think that is true. At the same time, without writing I feel stuck in this not awesome mood, and the longer I go without writing about it the more insane I feel! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Wow, I actually feel a bit better after typing that, huh, interesting. Maybe that's what I need, some big break some I can start over, like Evey from "V For Vendetta". Anyways, If you are still here reading this, thank you for sticking it out to the end. Listening to my rant of teen angst

Anyway, hopefully I will be writing again soon, and will be back in the land of sunshine and rainbows!

byeeeeee

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Rhiann Fleming

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I was born in London Ont., but my family moved to a neighbouring city when I was 4. I have moved a lot inside the city since, so I have lived in about 7 houses total. I don't mind changing houses, but I feel like I lose that sense of belonging somewhere.
I have 2 younger siblings, which I think has made me more protective and cautious.
Music is pretty much my life, I listen to all kinds. I think the ability to create something that has the power to inspire millions is an amazing gift.
Generally people say I am reserved and quiet, really I just analyse everything before I decide it's worth sharing with others. I don’t like it when people throw around words like love or hate, without considering their true meaning first. There is a word for everything, you just need to put a bit of thought into it, or get a thesaurus.

I think I want to be a criminologist when I'm older, but I haven't decided yet, why decide now when the window of opportunity is just beginning to open?
If you have any questions about me or my writing, send a carrier pigeon my way

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~msimoneaux20 May 10, 2013 New member Hobbyist Writer

So I began reading V for Vendetta last night. The book is seperated into ten parts and I read the first two already. Just from what I've read I already agree that the book is way better! I knew the movie must have left a lot of stuff out (all movies do) but the book has waaaay more stuff going on. I can't wait to read more to see what's in store! Thanks for leading me to it, I'm really enjoying it.

~Rhiannfleming 6 days ago

no problem! I love the book, and I'm happy to reccomend it

I'm sure you will like the rest of the book as well, it just gets more and more intense as it goes on!

~msimoneaux20 6 days ago New member Hobbyist Writer

Definately, I just read the third part last night. I did notice that the movie kind of follows it, but the book has a lot more. I think I might go look up some other graphic novels when I'm done. I was thinking bout reading Sin City and Watchmen, cause I saw the movies and they were both really good.